Saturday, December 13, 2014

Destructive Diamond

"The sunset still looks fake to me, the hero looks like he can't breathe, the damsel just left everything"
               --Mayday Parade, "Black Cat"

Once upon a time there was a family that lived on a colossal diamond. The Washington's owned generational wealth; the status that corresponds with this manipulates the characters personalities and actions. Kismine, one of the daughters, is an extravagant and beautiful girl of sixteen. She is described to have "physical perfection", and acts flirtatious and fake around John Unger, their summer house guest. Kismine is like the Kim Kardashian of today. But hidden under this mask of elegance, corruption lies in the soul of Kismine, and everyone in her family. They "sacrifice some of their best friends" because the family is afraid of a guest disclosing the following: wealth, location, and the giant diamond, in order to hoard their grand prosperity. Kismine reveals this to John, speaking with nervous and stressful rhetoric. "Yes-th-that's the-the whole t-trouble. I grew up qu-quite attached to some of them. So did Jasmine, but she kept inv-inviting them anyway". This conveys the intensity of corruption that lies beneath the surface of the Washington family. Because Kismine speaks with such tension, it is implied (and ironic) that there is mental pressure to keep the secret in order to maintain a status that doesn't portray corruption. Like pink elephants, Kismine may look charming and pretty on the outside, yet is fake and has a fraudulent mentality. John Unger is ultimately her hero, like Moses in Exodus, because he removes her from her corrupt home into a world of reality.    

6 comments:

  1. Wow. Sarah, this post was so well-written! You tied in all the words so skillfully, and the ending is so whoa.

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  2. This was written very well. Your ability to express your thinking with sophisticated diction is reflected in this blog post. Really cool!!!

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  3. Sarah, I like that you referred to John as "Moses". That's an interesting connection that I didn't think to make. Also, I think the picture you used really reflects the short story in general. Nice job :D

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  4. Yes. Wow. I really liked how you were able to use all the "puzzle pieces" and turn it into a fluent story! Great Work ~as always! :)

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  5. Wow, Sarah! Oh my gosh this is written so well and you did a fabulous job at piecing everything together. Great job, this is amazing!

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  6. I like how you used John as a symbol of Moses! Nice job :)

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